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How to give effective feedback
Started By The WordCloud |
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I had some feedback today on my first ever piece of writing. All
the ...View
Latest poster: Gary 1 day ago
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How to seek an effective critique
Started By The WordCloud |
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You're welcome, Trzagor. The Preditors and Editors website has
saved many ...View
Latest poster: EmmaD 1 month ago
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Submission Guidelines (IMPORTANT)
Started By The WordCloud |
32 | 1747 |
Hey - she's not just a pretty face. Good idea, Vero! I shudder to
think ...View
Latest poster: Dee 11 months ago
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Spew. Again :)
Started By Liss |
1 | 8 |
It's certainly not spew! It would be even better if you were to
use ...View
Latest poster: Recovering Chocoholic 33 mins ago
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11. Too Late (part two)
Started By Gerilyn |
11 | 95 |
Is she really dead!!!...she can't be!!!...gawd!...this, once again,
races ...View
Latest poster: Mcallan 2 hours ago
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Spellbound. Chapt 10 (part 1)
Started By Gerilyn |
6 | 33 |
Liss, your work is better by miles- but i thank you any way hun xView
Latest poster: Gerilyn 2 hours ago
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11. Too Late (part one)
Started By Gerilyn |
17 | 188 |
Hi Geri...once more...what a pace you keep up!.....it's
breathless. ...View
Latest poster: Mcallan 2 hours ago
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11. Vissi D'Arte
Started By MarkRutterford |
5 | 47 |
Hi Mark, I had the same queries regarding the 'harem cushions'
unless he's ...View
Latest poster: Gerilyn 2 hours ago
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Spellbound. Chapter 10 (part 2)
Started By Gerilyn |
3 | 28 |
Ok...this is really good Geri. A totally unexpected twist....and a
nice ...View
Latest poster: Mcallan 3 hours ago
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Blue Moon - Chapter 2
Started By Jdodd |
7 | 29 |
Hi - I posted this on another thread before I realised that there
was at ...View
Latest poster: Athelstone 7 hours ago
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'Intruder' - very short story by Ien Cleary (WtheU)
Started By Wrathnar the Unreasonable |
13 | 110 |
Beep: most of the mags I've looked up that take short fiction are
looking ...View
Latest poster: Wrathnar the Unreasonable 11 hours ago
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Collateral Damage - rewrite with horror and emotion included.over 18's only -sex and violence included
Started By stephenterry |
10 | 110 |
Thanks for reading and commenting Gels and Mark. I'm happy that the
clock ...View
Latest poster: stephenterry 11 hours ago
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Blue Moon - Chapter 2
Started By Jdodd |
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I'm left with a positive feeling after reading this, but I do think
you've ...View
Latest poster: Athelstone 12 hours ago
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My early poems (postscript to 'Footsteps'
Started By mike |
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hi mike, i must apologise for appearing a bit dense (it happens a
lot) but ...View
Latest poster: Ron Blanco 12 hours ago
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More Doom and Gloom
Started By Athelstone |
15 | 127 |
Thank you very much for that SecretSpi. I absolutely agree that
it ...View
Latest poster: Athelstone 1 day ago
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My first ever bit of writing and first ever post.
Started By Gary |
11 | 69 |
Thanks Bradwyn. I have had an offer for help with editing as I
wouldnt ...View
Latest poster: Gary 1 day ago
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Jess
Started By Bradwyn |
15 | 130 |
Thanks Ron and Ki, I am thinking of reposting when i finish. i thnk
i've ...View
Latest poster: Bradwyn 1 day ago
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Blue Moon - Chapter 2
Started By Jdodd |
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<p>I've tried to edit this chapter but I admit it definately
needs ...View
Latest poster: Jdodd 1 day ago
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New Spew!
Started By Liss |
14 | 113 |
Others have already covered edit points, so I'm just gonna say that
I find ...View
Latest poster: Wrathnar the Unreasonable 1 day ago
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A Short, Selective Journey Through Hell: Chapter 1
Started By Gerry |
25 | 329 |
Dude: never apologise for the length (fnarr fnarr). I read this
before, ...View
Latest poster: Wrathnar the Unreasonable 1 day ago
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Blue Moon - Revised
Started By Jdodd |
11 | 80 |
Hello Jdodd. I see two strands to this: (1) an Indiana Jones type
...View
Latest poster: Ron Blanco 1 day ago
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Just for fun - a break from the tedium of a re-write
Started By stephenterry |
8 | 83 |
Hehe, I'm starting to see how your mind works, stephen. Carry On
Writing! View
Latest poster: Ron Blanco 1 day ago
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FOOTSTEPS
Started By mike |
5 | 61 |
Hello Mike. A challenging piece for intellectuals - so outside my
sphere ...View
Latest poster: stephenterry 1 day ago
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A Short, Selective Journey Through Hell: Chapter 2
Started By Gerry |
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It is the scientific and philosphical ingredients of the story ...View
Latest poster: mike 1 day ago
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Speeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!
Started By Liss |
8 | 100 |
Hello Liss. Lee makes some interesting points. I um'd and ah'd
about the ...View
Latest poster: Ron Blanco 1 day ago
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