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  by Has'san 24 days ago

  Happy to help.
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  by Has'san 26 days ago

  No problem about feedback, i think its great to help another writer. And yes awaiting the next installment, i am sure you won't make us wait a longer for that one. Write on ane keep smiling you too.
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  by Has'san 26 days ago

  Then comes the second part, evenly more interesting. I really want to know how the story will go on thus waiting for the third part. No more punctuation problems here. There were two things that i thought you needed to correct; in the begining you mentioned 'intake of breathe' i think it should have been breath. Then at one place you wrote we gets; correcting these mistakes will improve the quality of already-good material. Write on ;)
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  by Has'san 27 days ago

  Starting with, i liked this part. Descriptions and details were generously provided and they were excellent. However, at some places the sentences were often vague either because they were long or lacked very-much-needed punctuation. Then, the plot was a bit unclear, may be as i move on i will get a clearer image, am i right? The characters were potentially good. All in all it was a fine read, editing will certainly make it a lot better than it already is. Hope that helps. Up for the second part then, here we go. Have a nice day.
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  by Has'san 27 days ago

  I read your part 1 of 4 of the resting place and i want to comment on it but my mobile wouldn't let me comment on the forum. If you do not mind can i comment on your wall?
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  by Has'san 27 days ago

  Hi, just wanted to let you know for two days i have been trying to take out time to read your work but couldn't tomorrow i certainly will.
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  by maryluv 1 month ago

  Only the one sister? Did you eat the others? I can black-cat you on that one. I have 2 sisters and 3 brothers. Just the one set of parents, though.
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  by maryluv 1 month ago

  Welcome 75th son - were your parents trying for a daughter?
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  by Eshka 1 month ago

  Hi there 7thSon, thought I'd swoop in and say hello and welcome. I'm sure you've already noticed it's a very friendly place here, it's a bottomless sack of wonders! Lots and help, support, advice and a little bit of general nonsense to lighten the load :) Hope you settle in quickly - if you need anything don't hesitate to ask someone. The best way is to perhaps change your status or send a bulletin (left hand side of the page with music, photos, blog etc) or failing that, post up a message in the forums. I've not been here very long but it's my second home already!
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  by Spangles 1 month ago

  Welcome to the Cloud, 7thSon. I hope you enjoy it here. As Weens said, the calendar is having a strange week. It made me 2010 earlier in the week, which would explain a few things but it worried me that I couldn't remember the first 1870 years of my life. Some other strange thing will happen next week. That's life on the Cloud, but most of us love it.