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  by Weens 5 months ago

  Happy Birthday. I hope your day is full of laughter. Have a good one.
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  by Spangles 5 months ago

  In case you're wondering (or worried!), the Cloud lists the day's birthdays in a little box on the home page. Have a lovely time, anyway.
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  by Spangles 5 months ago

  Happy birthday, 7th Son! I see that you're 100 years old, so I hope you've had your telegram from the Queen by now. Or does she only send emails these days?
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  by Has'san 6 months ago

  Happy to help.
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  by Has'san 7 months ago

  No problem about feedback, i think its great to help another writer. And yes awaiting the next installment, i am sure you won't make us wait a longer for that one. Write on ane keep smiling you too.
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  by Has'san 7 months ago

  Then comes the second part, evenly more interesting. I really want to know how the story will go on thus waiting for the third part. No more punctuation problems here. There were two things that i thought you needed to correct; in the begining you mentioned 'intake of breathe' i think it should have been breath. Then at one place you wrote we gets; correcting these mistakes will improve the quality of already-good material. Write on ;)
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  by Has'san 7 months ago

  Starting with, i liked this part. Descriptions and details were generously provided and they were excellent. However, at some places the sentences were often vague either because they were long or lacked very-much-needed punctuation. Then, the plot was a bit unclear, may be as i move on i will get a clearer image, am i right? The characters were potentially good. All in all it was a fine read, editing will certainly make it a lot better than it already is. Hope that helps. Up for the second part then, here we go. Have a nice day.
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  by Has'san 7 months ago

  I read your part 1 of 4 of the resting place and i want to comment on it but my mobile wouldn't let me comment on the forum. If you do not mind can i comment on your wall?
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  by Has'san 7 months ago

  Hi, just wanted to let you know for two days i have been trying to take out time to read your work but couldn't tomorrow i certainly will.
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  by maryluv 7 months ago

  Only the one sister? Did you eat the others? I can black-cat you on that one. I have 2 sisters and 3 brothers. Just the one set of parents, though.